Four top-band paragraphs, tuned to AQA / Edexcel, for whatever the extract throws at you.
Extract Focus
Pick what the extract is really about. The model paragraphs rewrite instantly.
Identify the extract’s main pressure (power / guilt / pack / surveillance), pick the focus, then tweak one detail to match the moment. Keep terminology concrete: levels, proxemics, specials, wash, gobo, underscore, diegetic.